Primary Response - 2
Download link so Deev is spared the trouble of making one.
[Techno] Primary Response
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[Techno] Primary Response
"If we would guide by the light of reason, we must let our minds be bold."
~Louis Brandeis
~Louis Brandeis
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0:12 - Very quick to jump in
0:25 - Sounds like something's lacking in the backing music
0:48 - Nice transition
1:04 - Cute build
1:28 - Getting the feeling it's not going to build more
1:43 - Corrected
1:53 - Still not there
2:15 - Grand
2:22 - Grander
2:32 - Needs to be sharper, the tone cuts out some of the backing. Little harsh, but just what the elf wanted to hear.
3:07 - Can hear extra beats creaping in, nice
3:22 - Nice ease off
3:33 - Like that
3:42 - Decent pattern forming
4:13 - New sound there is cool, but doesn't seem to continue for very long
4:39 - That one's in there for about the right amount of time
5:02 - Nice breakdown
5:16 - Hoping this explodes...
5:40 - Okay, building is good too
6:06 - Nice, building tension
6:16 - Drops back a little too much
6:26 - Brings it back nicely
7:07 - Wanted something more explosive to end on, but not bad
Much better than the first, you're certainly improving a great deal in a short period of time.
0:25 - Sounds like something's lacking in the backing music
0:48 - Nice transition
1:04 - Cute build
1:28 - Getting the feeling it's not going to build more
1:43 - Corrected
1:53 - Still not there
2:15 - Grand
2:22 - Grander
2:32 - Needs to be sharper, the tone cuts out some of the backing. Little harsh, but just what the elf wanted to hear.
3:07 - Can hear extra beats creaping in, nice
3:22 - Nice ease off
3:33 - Like that
3:42 - Decent pattern forming
4:13 - New sound there is cool, but doesn't seem to continue for very long
4:39 - That one's in there for about the right amount of time
5:02 - Nice breakdown
5:16 - Hoping this explodes...
5:40 - Okay, building is good too
6:06 - Nice, building tension
6:16 - Drops back a little too much
6:26 - Brings it back nicely
7:07 - Wanted something more explosive to end on, but not bad
Much better than the first, you're certainly improving a great deal in a short period of time.
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Second in the set of four. And I did these a long time ago. Just never had a place to put 'em up for everyone until now.
Thanks again WF, if you're reading this.
I'll probably get the third one up tomorrow sometime, possibly the fourth, as well.
Thanks again WF, if you're reading this.
I'll probably get the third one up tomorrow sometime, possibly the fourth, as well.
"If we would guide by the light of reason, we must let our minds be bold."
~Louis Brandeis
~Louis Brandeis