[ED/SR]The Ancient Files: Blood Magic
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[ED/SR]The Ancient Files: Blood Magic
My new blood magic page is up. A resource for players of both Earthdawn and Shadowrun, it lists every form of blood magic, gives a short history in both ages, and has a list of every blood charm, as well as lists of all thread items and spells that use blood magic. Enjoy, tell me if I missed anything.
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- Demon
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Frankly, AH, the pages may contain good info but its so very cluttered and not really laid out I can't get past one or two paragraphs. Nothing against you, but just me and visual uses.
10:41 Kai: Ohayou minna
10:42 Adam: ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER!
10:44 Kai: Fuck off, how's that? ;P
10:45 Adam: Much better.
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Tried staring up a thread in Artistic License for some ideas/feedback? With the broad spectrum of people we have on the board and the experience with webpages they bring, it can't lose you anything to try.
The 86 Rules of Boozing
75. Beer makes you mellow, champagne makes you silly, wine makes you dramatic, tequila makes you felonious.
75. Beer makes you mellow, champagne makes you silly, wine makes you dramatic, tequila makes you felonious.
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Well rather than just 'bugging Adam', why not do it properly and get everyone involved? Two, or more, heads are better than one and all that.
One suggestion that I'd make would be to leave a line between paragraphs and then not indent at the start of each new one. For me personally, that'd break up the mass of text some and make it more readable. And like Kai said, justify it.
One suggestion that I'd make would be to leave a line between paragraphs and then not indent at the start of each new one. For me personally, that'd break up the mass of text some and make it more readable. And like Kai said, justify it.
The 86 Rules of Boozing
75. Beer makes you mellow, champagne makes you silly, wine makes you dramatic, tequila makes you felonious.
75. Beer makes you mellow, champagne makes you silly, wine makes you dramatic, tequila makes you felonious.
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Sorry, AH, but I'm on Kai's boat. It's too cluttered and uneven. The material's good, but the way it's being presented undermines that. This isn't just a random series of notes, but a unified work, so it has to look like one.
Tell you what. If I've got time today, I'll do a quick run-through and post up an alternative layout.
Tell you what. If I've got time today, I'll do a quick run-through and post up an alternative layout.
"There is surely nothing other than the single purpose of the present moment. A man's whole life is a succession of moment after moment. If one fully understands the present moment, there will be nothing else to do, and nothing left to pursue." - Yamamoto Tsunetomo
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Like I said, its me. I can't read Tolkien, text document documentation bores me, I can't read a webpage that's to me a lot of text splattered haphazardly on a page. It might well be awesome, but I won't be able to stand it long enough to find out.
10:41 Kai: Ohayou minna
10:42 Adam: ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER!
10:44 Kai: Fuck off, how's that? ;P
10:45 Adam: Much better.